Showing posts with label alice. Show all posts
Showing posts with label alice. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 6, 2019

Taking A Deep Breath Before Finishing Broadcast 12

This is a spoiler-free blog post, so go ahead and read it if you haven't been reading along with the serialized version of Broadcast 12, it's safe. Oh, and the art at the top of this post has nothing to do with the books. I just really liked it and it was in my licensing pile.
Over the last few books, I've ignored entire planets, but I won't ignore this. Let me unpack that.
There are planets in the Haven System that are very interesting, with new terrain, secrets, and stories waiting for our characters, but the story of quick settlement, advancement, and personal discovery and invasion haven't left much, if any room for that. Tamber is huge, almost as large as Earth, and even though it has far fewer people, only about a hundred million now, our characters would find several stories while exploring that planetary body alone. Then there's the larger, more prominent and much less populated planet of Lonos not far from it that is fully terraformed and overgrown that has only been mentioned two or three times and not by name.
The focus of the story, and of the characters we're following is on Tamber because it's all they and the books can handle. It's also where they landed, so it became the centre of the story.
A number of stories that weren't central to the plot were put aside for the time being as well,  and some of them will take centre stage again, like the one coming up at the end of this book. I wish I could be more specific, but I'm trying to avoid spoilers.
The meeting of Alice and Noah (Carnie) was one such story, and it was put off for an entire novel. They were supposed to meet in Broadcast 11, but it was pushed to 12 because there was only so much room in Broadcast 11 and Alice had some other things to do.
If I could afford to work on a Spinward Fringe book that was 1,000 pages, I would, but I have to tell this story in smaller pieces, so some stories get pushed to the side. Even still, I think it's time to start telling the story I've wanted to bring in since Broadcast 8, and it all begins with Alice and Carnie really meeting. I'll ignore an entire planet, and take a momentary break from telling the story of the barbarians at the gate to show you something that's been in my head for years now.
Even this close to the end, we're taking a look back to Broadcast 0: Origins as a story takes a nice step forward. I'll get around to exploring Planet Lonos and the other planet sized ideas.
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[Spinward Fringe Broadcast 12: Invasion is serializing on Patreon now, and will be available in full EBook form on May 11, 2019 with preorders available now]

Wednesday, March 21, 2018

Spinward Fringe Continues: Alice's Revenge!

Months ago, when I realized that Broadcast 11: Revenge wouldn't be out for a while, I started sharing Alice's story from that book. It's gone well, and Patreon Subscribers have even contributed opinions that helped me fine-tune the direction of the story.

It's been months, and Broadcast 11: Revenge is nearing completion, and Alice's story from the book looms large on the Patreon site. There is a release date and a book coming soon, but until then, you can check over 15 chapters out for free or subscribe to see over 25 chapters detailing Alice's journey through the book.

Her story takes up roughly half of the books' content, and the version you'll be reading is early draft so there will be changes that will come when the book is published in its final form. If you think you would enjoy reading her story individually in an early format, then again with the book, I invite you to read along with over a hundred others on the Patreon site. If not, then maybe you should wait; it won't be long now!

Click here to go to the Index to the Revenge Preview: Alice's Revenge on Patreon.

Thank you very much for your patience, the Spinward Fringe story is still alive and well!

RL

Wednesday, December 13, 2017

Spinward Fringe Continues With The Broadcast 11: Revenge Preview!

Despite a few issues that were caused by yours truly, Spinward Fringe Broadcast 10.5: Carnie's Tale is a success. Sure, it didn't chart high, but over a thousand of you downloaded it and the reviews are largely positive. Thank you so much.

A few typos and minor errors weren't caught before it was uploaded, so an update addressing those will be posted next month, you can update for free wherever you bought the book.

Right now I'm working on Spinward Fringe Broadcast 11: Revenge, which is due out at the end of February. That doesn't mean that you have to wait that long to read it though. Chapters are already being posted on my Patreon page. Every Saturday a free chapter will appear, with subscribers getting a bonus chapter every Wednesday. We're following Alice's journey through the novel until it comes out. For the sake of Patreon, I'm calling the serialized preview Alice's Revenge. You can find the Index here.

Spinward Fringe and everyone who loves it has kept the roof over my head for nearly ten years now, and as we approach the tenth anniversary of the series, I'm going to concentrate on delivering more content in that universe. I'm constantly tempted to work on other projects, and in 2017 I gave in, finishing a lot of work on two role playing games before completing the first part of an epic fantasy series I've been imagining for over twenty years, Highshield.

Rounding out the year, I decided to develop characters and settings that I knew I wouldn't have room for in Spinward Fringe Broadcast 11: Revenge. Many of the chapters in Carnie's Tale were cut from Broadcast 11 because they wandered too far from the main story, and wouldn't have seen the light of day if it weren't for this side project. I'm proud of what that turned into, and I'm glad to see people like it in general.

So, that brings us to the main point, and the next two Spinward Fringe Broadcasts, Revenge and Invasion. The development of these novels has now taken over two years, and over twenty chapters have been written then cut (including content that reappeared in Carnie's Tale and in a short story on the Patreon page), representing some disappointing false starts but good ideas that led in the wrong direction for Broadcast 11. There are great stories waiting to be told in these books and the one that will follow Invasion, but digging down to them has taken longer than anticipated. Now, I believe I've got an outline I'm happy with for Broadcast 11 and Broadcast 12 is in great shape too. It's all I'm working on, and for the tenth anniversary of Spinward Fringe it's all I want to work on. I want to celebrate 2018 by moving the story forward in meaningful, exciting ways, and by wrapping up storylines before moving on to a new era in the Spinward Fringe universe that will see a crossover with Chaos Core and much more.

So, until my holiday and afterwards I'll be working on Broadcasts 11 and 12, and you can get a great big piece already. 

RL

Thursday, November 30, 2017

Spinward Fringe Broadcast 10.5: Carnie's Tale is out!

The final title of this book tells you exactly where it fits into the saga. I know many people have preordered this already by a different name, and you don't have to worry. This is the same book, but due to a few difficulties, this, the final version had to be released.

Carnie's Tale follows Alice as she explores Noah Lucas' past on a treacherous planet where machines are out to kill the humans and the people are just as untrustworthy. Noah is currently a member of Minh-Chu's Samurai Squadron, where he's known as Carnie.

After this story started to come out on the Patreon page, several people started asking if it would be released as a book of it's own. After looking over the story I had, I realized that with a little work, I could expand it into a full novel and write an important precursor story to Spinward Fringe Broadcast 11: Revenge.

Carnie's Tale quickly became an important book in the series, developing Alice, her surroundings, and especially the title character: Carnie. I truly enjoy the story in this book. It's some of my best work, so I hope you enjoy it as well.

I'm busy at work on Spinward Fringe Broadcast 11: Revenge. Finishing Carnie's Tale helped me sort a few problems I had with Broadcast 11 out, and the whole series will be better going forward thanks to it's completion.

Here is where you can find Broadcast 10.5: Carnie's Tale.

Amazon.com
Amazon.co.uk
Amazon.ca
Amazon.com.au
iBookstore (The iBookstore by Apple)
Smashwords
Barnes & Noble

RL 

Saturday, November 18, 2017

Carnie's Tale Is Everywhere

Chapter 30 of Carnie's Tale is up and chapter 15 is free! 15 is the last chapter available to non-subscribers, but the whole book is out, so you can download it to your reader from your favourite retailer now.

Chapter 29 did go up on Wednesday as scheduled, but there was no announcement since I was putting out a dumpster fire of my own making at the time (Sorry about that to all affected. If you preordered and still have a problem, update your book using Amazon's dashboard).

Other than an issue with Amazon, the launch for Carnie's Tale went really well. Thanks to a few positive reviews, people who were hesitant to check the book out are picking it up this week. I'm just glad I got things fixed in time for Thanksgiving in the US, since most of the emails I'm receiving now are from people who are thanking me for releasing something in time for their long trips to visit family.

Thank you for supporting this book, I hope everyone enjoys it!

 
RL
 
[Broadcast 11: Revenge is next!]

Sunday, September 24, 2017

Spinward Fringe Broadcast 11: Revenge Expands With A New Novella

Approximately one month passes between Spinward Fringe Broadcast 10: Freeground and Broadcast 11: Revenge. During that month Alice is still in the Haven Fleet Academy Apex Program, and there was one story that didn't fit in Broadcast 10 that I wanted to finish. It fits right into the middle of Alice's training course, and it easily connects Spinward Fringe Broadcasts 10 and 11.

Alice is given a complex and secretive assignment: she is to review months worth of voice recordings, video and pictures taken by Noah Lucas, better known as Carnie, a member of the Samurai Squadron. The material was recorded while he was on Iora, a technically advanced world as the holocaust virus struck it. She is to review all materials and create a report that includes insights into the young pilot's personality, strategic information about Iora and any other details that could help Haven Fleet. Before long, Alice becomes personally invested in the plight of her subject, and makes discoveries that could change her forever.

Meanwhile, a permanent government is taking hold in Haven Shore, and the Fleet is undergoing one last shakeup that could break the Apex class apart. All the while Alice is left to wonder where her father and his ship, the Revenge have gone while they wait for the rest of their active fleet to return from the Iron Head Nebula.

The Spinward Fringe saga continues in Carnie's Tale, the connective tissue between Spinward Fringe Broadcast 10: Freeground and Spinward Fringe Broadcast 11: Revenge, telling Alice's story between those books from a more personal perspective.

As a side note, this story is written for adaptation into a 2 episode television script, so if you ever wondered what a special pair of Spinward Fringe episodes would look like after several seasons, this is a good chance to do that. I'll be writing more of these stories in the future, as the Spinward Fringe series has flirted with television adaptation more than once and I have many ideas for shorter books that have been waiting for years.

Carnie's Tale will be released on October 28, 2017 and is available for preorder now from:

Amazon US, Amazon UK, Amazon Australia, Amazon CA, and all other Amazon regional sites.
Apple iBookstore
Barnes & Noble
Kobo
Smashwords
...and several other ebook retailers.

Thank you so much for your support this year, I can't wait to get this story into your hands!

RL

[The release of Carnie's Tale will be followed by Broadcast 11: Revenge near the end of 2017.]

Saturday, July 29, 2017

Spinward Fringe Continues on Patreon!

Work on Spinward Fringe Broadcast 11: Revenge continues. I admit to taking a much needed break, and hope that everyone's patience continues to hold even though it's been much less than a year since the release of Broadcast 10: Freeground. Preview chapters and the book itself is coming. I like what I have so far.

In the meantime, there's a lot to see on the Patreon page. For Spinward Fringe fans, a new serial has launched called Spinward Fringe Continues. So far there is a short, three part story called Haven Shore Immigration, and four parts of Carnie's Tale to read. Here's a link to the index.

It's my hope that these stories, most of which would never have been published or told, will entertain you between book releases. I enjoy telling these stories and expanding the universe in less predictable ways that may not fit in a book, so I look forward to every release day on Patreon.

There's other stuff on Patreon too, most of which is free, like concept drawings, podcasts (more of those coming in the next couple weeks), and a fantasy novel called Highshield, which is in its final chapters for now (over 30 chapters so far!)


RL

Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Update On Spinward Fringe Broadcast 10: Freeground

What happens when the scope of the story you're telling increases? It seems that the size of some of the chapters increases as well. The one I'm working on will take three days by the time I'm finished, but it includes a journey, and a whole new look at Haven Shore. 
There's no release date yet, but I can tell you... Alice and Minh-Chu play huge roles in this novel. So far there are over 65,000 words written about Alice, and there is no figure yet on how long Minh-Chu's journey in this novel will be, but it definitely promises to be large in size and scale. A whole new phase of Spinward Fringe begins in Broadcast 10. The Triton Fleet Academy is open, and Alice is signed up. Familiar and new faces emerge as she takes her journey through Officer Training. The biggest question is where she will end up if and when she graduates. Other major events are taking place in the Iron Head Nebula, but it's too soon to share details. I'm working hard... I hate blowing deadlines, and after taking a short break to get the details about this book together, and to clear my head, I'm working hard to complete this science fiction epic. This feels like a special book already, which is a good thing, because the stakes are incredibly high for most of the starring characters. There are podcasts coming. The studio is ready, and my co-host is good to go, so you can look forward to a few new podcast episodes in the coming weeks. We may also be working on something entirely new that should be highly enjoyable too. Thank you all for your support and patience. Look for more preview chapters soon! RL

Monday, February 29, 2016

Spinward Fringe Broadcast 10: Freeground Preview 2 - Alice

This is the second preview chapter for Spinward Fringe Broadcast 10: Freeground. We join Alice in this part, and discover what she's been up to in the two weeks since the Triton and Revenge set out on their quest in the Iron Head Nebula.

I'm also including her character preamble, a blurb about Alice that will appear in the beginning of the book with many other blurbs that provide a basic overview of recent pertinent events with regards to each major and secondary character.

This can't be overstated: This chapter and the preamble blurb before it contain MASSIVE SPOILERS  for anyone who has not read Broadcasts 0-9 and possibly the Expendable Few. You've been warned!

Enjoy!

PREAMBLE

Alice Valent

After undergoing a drastic transformation that removed all framework technology from her body along with all the advantages and vulnerabilities it brought, Alice Valent is preparing for the qualifier tests that will allow her to begin the intense curriculum offered through the Triton Fleet Academy. Her mind is sharper than ever now that the filter imposed on her by the framework is gone, but with cognative clarity comes a new emotional awareness. Alice also has to deal with being a more mature young adult while lacking the physical advantages in strength and speed the framework body she once had provided.

PREVIEW CHAPTER

Alice Versus The Obstacle Course


The Ranger obstacle course was the most intimidating thing she’d ever seen when Alice started practicing. It took her only minutes to get permission from the Sergeant in charge to attempt to take it on. Without framework enhancements, stimulants, and no idea what she could do in her new body, she made her first attempt with trepidation. Countless bruises, sprains and one knock out from a long fall were her rewards.
It frightened her that she couldn’t finish the course at all on the first day. Instead of asking for help, she stubbornly kept her mouth shut, and tried again. On day two she made it all the way through, but she had no energy left, everything hurt, and the next morning was even worse when she woke up with aches and pains. Lacey had her on recovery medication before they were through their first hour of tutoring on the topic of Common Galactic Law.
The memories of finishing the course with little effort as a framework construct made the effort all the more frustrating as she tackled it again the next day. The course was different when she practiced it as a framework, it was much shorter, but familiar sections were still brutally difficult.
Sargent Piprayn Markase, or Pip as everyone called him, watched from the side lines as she did the most problematic sections of the course over and over until she was at the end of her two-hour session. So many parts of the course required everything of her; concentration, the willingness to push her body, take risks, to reconsider the method of passage from completely different angles. Alice came out of every two-hour session clear headed, but well beaten. No one but the Sargent was there, so she could have tried another round, but the sore muscles in her legs, arms, shoulders and back protested.
He didn’t offer advice, just made sure he was there to pick her up if she fell for the first week. The time she took on the course was solitary for that whole period, she knew when the Ranger trainees used it, in the early morning, so she crammed her other studies in around it.
On day seven she turned up in her thin vacsuit and deactivated the systems that would save her from all but the worst breaks and lethal falls then looked at the entrance to the course. “I’m going to beat my worst time as a framework today, you son of a bitch.” She told it.
“Hope you weren’t talking to me,” Pip said as he came out from under the platform. He had pieces of netting in his hand and a few tools at his feet.
“No, sorry,” Alice replied. “This thing just seems alive sometimes, and it hates me.”
“Anyone who has fallen into an electrified net in section five might think so. You’re doing well, by the way.”
“Not really,” Alice said. Her gaze was drawn back to the dark entrance, a blacked-out gauntlet with metal posts that moved around the hallway randomly. It forced the entrant to forget they had eyes, and find their way as quickly as they could with their hands outstretched.
“I remember seeing you take this course before you changed,” Pip said. “It seemed like cheating to me every time. You never really had to use your head, you just pushed through. Finishing the course means much more to you now, yes?”
“That’s the truth.” Alice stared at the entrance for a moment before asking; “any advice?”
Pip finished picking up his tools and nodded. “Stop taking the course the way it wants you to.”
“What does that mean?”
“Take it even slower this time, you’ll see,” Pip said.
She did exactly as he said, looking for ways around the more complicated sections of the course, the ones that threatened to slow her down the most, and found several alternative routes along the way. Every one of them required some thought, and often some extra effort for a few moments, like a tight squeeze or a short climb up a post, but most of the alternate routes rewarded her by cutting precious seconds off her time. Some obstacles she could not complete without falling and climbing through netting or triggering traps she knew were there but had to press through became possible as she noticed unconventional solutions.
Climbing over monkey bars and running along the side rails over top was safer, and cut her time down. Staying against one wall until she ran into an obstacle, then returning to the same wall once she was past it in blacked out sections of the course made her progress easier. Climbing most of the way up a steep incline then swinging around the top instead of over saved her energy and again, reduced the amount of time it took. In the whipping gauntlet, where dozens of arms that were hard enough to hurt but not so hard that her vacsuit would protect her, she found a tripping arm that was loose enough for her to pull off, so she could block most of the arms as they came at her from the walls and ceilings. There was even a hole on the outside of the course where she could return the arm to its actuator when she was finished.
There were hand and foot holds disguised as parts of the course everywhere, once she knew how to look for them, the course was less linear, and more a series of physical multiple choice questions. Alice approached Pip the third time she finished running the course that day. Those were also the first times she’d finished the course without having to drop out of a few sections after several attempts, skipping parts that seemed impossible. “It’s cheating,” she told him.
“No, you are problem solving. This course is made to shape soldiers’ bodies, true, but also their minds. Three-dimensional thinking, an understanding of efficient movement, and basic problem solving are all critical to any effective soldier. Besides, you are just as well exercised today as you were yesterday, when you took that course as though there was only one way through, didn’t even make it through some sections after throwing yourself at them as hard as you could. Completing the course at all on your own is an accomplishment for anyone, you must feel better today than you did yesterday, a little proud.”
“I guess so, I ran it three times before calling it quits,” Alice replied, towelling her face off. Stray curls made the act more complicated than it had to be, and she decided to straighten her red hair before trying the course again.
“Good,” Pip said. “We’re adding a new vertical tomorrow, a five-part segment, go rest up.”
“Just wondering, did Lacey have anything to do with you helping me out here?”
“No, but she did tell me what your day away from the course is like, and I’m not surprised that you try so hard when you’re here. Impressed, maybe, but not surprised. If I had to go through legal and regulation tutorials for six hours a day, I’d be throwing myself into that course every chance I got.”
Alice’s preparation regimen for the Triton Fleet Academy kept her busy for most of the day and into the night. Law, history, Triton Fleet regulations and common technology study sessions were only interrupted by testing sessions and her time on the obstacle course. She liked the challenge, but by the end of each day her brain and body were equally tired, so much so that she looked forward to the regimen that would be imposed on her once she got in to the Advanced Officer Training Program.
For days she thought she was the only one following the preparation routine, but she found out that there were eleven more people doing the same thing, only they didn’t even look in the obstacle course’s direction. From that moment on she couldn’t help but be curious about who the other students were, and how their scores compared. She wasn’t allowed to see that information, so she only worked on her studies harder. They were ghostly critics and competitors, who she pictured watching her succeed and fail through Crewcast even though she knew that wasn’t possible.
The vertical section of the course, which included sections of metal netting, rope netting, climbing areas with various types of handholds – including break-aways that were made to fail – and a forty nine degree inverted top, defeated her. Her exercise suit saved her from a broken neck on her second attempt. She finished the course without completing the two tower section and returned to her studies.
The next day she moved through the five segments of the course that she’d grown to know then stopped at the first tower of the vertical section. Alice knew why she didn’t complete it the previous day. Thinking about it kept her up all night. She attacked the vertical section the day before, afraid to stop mid obstacle and inspect her surroundings. With a slower approach, she started climbing the chain net that led to the first climbing tower, and she made her way up, testing her hand holds, working her way sideways when she wasn’t sure her reach was long enough. The first tower presented its own solution when she made it almost all the way to the other side and found a seam in the wall. That was the key hand hold for someone her height, and she finished getting to the top of the ten-metre tower easily. By the time she was crossing to the second tower, she was completely focused on carefully finding her way to the top. Her fingers hurt, and her shoulders ached, but she didn’t feel weak, so Alice decided to press on.
Alice was half way up a rope net when she realized that there was a short cut up the last few metres of the second tower. The surface she was climbing towards had three handholds on the far side, and one edge of the rope swing was loose, really loose. She made her way to that loose end and looked down. Those slim hand holds would get her several metres across one face of the tower, saving her long minutes. The risk was clear, if she missed she would fall twelve metres. The reward? She’d be within two metres of the top, close to more hand holds, and around the forty nine degree incline.
Pushing off from the wall in front of her, she began swinging towards the three hand holds on the far edge of the side wall of the tower. Alice was able to swing within half a metre of them. “No way,” she said to herself, mentally picturing herself making the leap, clearing the half metre, only to have the hand holds crumble in her fingers.
Instead of trusting the course, she swung again, lashing out with her foot to kick the top handhold. It was solid. She repeated the act with the one below it, and it burst as though it were made of dry clay. It would have been the easiest one to grab if she jumped. Her foot landed a blow on the third handhold, the lowest, and she found it was solid.
Alice took a practice swing, her palms were starting to sweat. She held her breath as she swung out as far as she could, then let go of rope as it reached its apex and almost went right past the handholds before she caught one with both hands. Her fingers ached at the shock and the pressure, her suit not helping at all. “Holy crap, I got it,” she whispered to herself hoarsely, securing her grip. A drop of sweat ran down her nose and dripped off the tip.
It took all her strength to pull herself up so she could reach the handhold above. With a curse at her height, or lack thereof, her fingers curled around the top handhold and she kept pulling. There was no way she could reach the top of the tower using those two handholds, so she secured her grip, resting a foot on the lower hold as she checked around the tower’s next corner.
A crack in the edging of the wall was the only way she could see herself getting up. Alice realized she’d have to hold there, get her foot up on the top handhold she was leaving behind, then push up the rest of the way, a three step move to the top.
It took her entire reach to get her hand to the crack and she wedged her hand into it. “Oh, God,” she said as she pulled and swung against the edge of the tower. She was almost there, high enough to reach out with her foot to the handhold she just left and make the rest of the distance to the tower top. Her hand protested as she swung her legs back towards her last handhold, staying on the wall with the grip of one hand in a crevasse. Her whole body almost swung free of the tower when her legs pendulum swung back and away from the corner of the wall, but Alice managed to hold on.
One more swing of her legs got her foot back to her last hand hold, so she could push the rest of the way up the tower. That trick had saved her a trip up a forty-five degree incline that would have tired her out just as much, and slowed her down even more. The first time she stood on top of that tower, she couldn’t help but grin at herself and take a moment to enjoy the view over the cliff side. The sandy beach, lush jungle bordering it, and ocean beyond was being lit by the first dawn that week. The ruddy red light shed by Kambis as it burned was overpowered by the yellow hues of dawn.
A week later she found an even better way to best that tower, and she had mastered that changing course. Pip made sure there were Rangers around during those last three days when she was practicing. In the two hours she had on the course, she could run it seven times before she had to quit for the day. The only parts she was wary of every time was the third segment – the floor and all the obstacles were constantly moving – and the vertical segment. That last segment taxed everyone’s endurance, regardless of how good they were at climbing.
On the seventh day Pip had most of the Ranger trainees there, at least six hundred fifty by her count, and a new group she hadn’t seen before. There was an army of them in white vacsuits with a yellow stripe down the sides. Alice ignored them, and ran her three practice runs through the course, then lapped around to the front, took a drink of her blended citrus juice and burst into a timed run. It would be her last attempt at the course as a civilian.
The course was once an elaborate torture device that reminded her that she was less than she once was, but fourteen days later she had mastered it. The course, her physical condition, and her method of approach were important, but the crucial thing was the mind behind the changing obstacle run. Pip was a master designer, and was responsible for all two hundred and ten metres of the course, but he only had one mind. He was her real opponent, and learning the course was a way of learning how he thought, where he would hide advantages, and what surprises he might set up for someone who isn’t as wary as they ought to be. The most common habit Pip had was his tendency to install obstacles that punished the unwary. He was a brilliant trickster who understood what kind of soldier his contraption was made to produce.
The course was well on its way to conditioning her physically, the progress she made was staggering but she also had to take recovery meds every night so she could do it the next day. Her flexibility and strength were on the increase, and by the time she did that timed run in front of over two thousand young people, she felt light, confident, and powerful.
Alice finished the course to the sound of applause, and didn’t feel like bowing or smiling at the people who gathered there. There were some black and yellow suited people in a small group standing separately from the rest. She knew who they were immediately – they were about to enter the regular Fleet Academy Officer’s program. Nine months of gruelling training awaited them, and she was about to begin the fast track version of the same thing, where she was expected to do the same thing in six months.
“Can I have a moment, Officer Trainee?” Pip asked, gesturing towards a spot on the speaking platform beside him.
“Yes, Sir,” she said as she joined him, towelling the sweat off of her face and neck.
“This is Alice Valent, you may not recognize her because she recently underwent serious medical treatment. All of her framework technology was removed using the latest technology, so she is as human as any of you. She has been running this course every day for two weeks while prepping for the Triton Fleet Officer Fast Track Program. The one you did not qualify for. Her qualification trials begin tomorrow, and I expect to hear good things.”
Alice looked at the two thousand assembled, stony-eyed, standing perfectly straight. Setting an example wasn’t her purpose that day, what she wanted to do was set a record, and she had. A glance at the command and control surface on the forearm of her exercise suit told her everything she wanted to know. Her timed run put her three minutes and fifty seconds faster than any other human on the new course. She was forty-two seconds behind the best nafalli time set by Iruuk Murlen.
“You will notice that she is much shorter than average, just over one point five metres, but she is in excellent shape. Seeing all of you people here did not distract her from her purpose, she did not show off, but took her practice runs before a timed trial. The course was not adjusted to suit any of her shortcomings, and it kicked her ass for the first week. She has never had a group or partner on this course, and makes the co-op section look like a walk in a meadow while she’s taking it solo. I encourage you all to try to solo the co-op section once in your off time sometime in the next month, just to see how good she is.”
“There’s a co-op section?” Alice asked in a whisper.
“Fourth segment,” Pip replied.
Alice could have hit him, there was nothing marking that long section of the course as a co-op segment, and it was the most puzzling area. She wasn’t able to finish the obvious path through without falling into shock netting. Instead, she learned to go around in not-so-obvious ways, climbing posts, crossing supports, and doing a horizontal ladder climb underneath the last obstacle for that segment on bars that were so far apart she had to catch two of the middle ones with her feet and use her momentum to finish, something she still hadn’t mastered.
Pip continued. “Valent is officer material. This is the kind of person who gets into an advanced program and will outrank you when you finish training. By the time you graduate she will have already seen things you cannot believe, have experience in command, and be able to kick your ass back into place without breaking a sweat. I do not expect you to surpass her example, but I will send you straight home if you stop trying. You just saw her set a record, and if it’s not beaten by the end of the month, I’m going to hold your class back until I’m satisfied that our new crewmembers are not soft. The good news is that you will not have to beat her record alone. You will have teams to practice this course with,” he said to the gathering. “You have six hours to complete it over three days, anyone who does not is rejected from their program. You will have to apply again next year. I’m going to make sure that you’re good enough to serve under Alice Valent by the time your finished here, or you won’t serve at all. Now, group one, head in slowly.” He pointed at the group of Officer Academy Trainees and five of their vacsuits blinked white several times before they headed down to the dark entrance of the obstacle course. “Your goal is to finish together, you will not finish this course solo the first time out, I guarantee it. Be careful, your suits will save you from most broken bones, but it won’t save you from the beating this course will give you if you do not pay attention.”
“Enjoy your last day as a civilian, Alice,” Pip said to her quietly, offering his hand. “I didn’t think you’d finish when I saw you here the first day, but you changed my mind on the second.”
“Too short?” Alice said, shaking his hand.
“No, I’ve never seen anyone take a beating that bad and come back unless it was a direct order. You must have a little masochist in you.”
“Just trying to measure up to my own expectations, Sargent,” Alice replied. She pulled the tie from her straightened red hair and shook her mane loose.
“Keep it up, you’re going to make one hell of an Officer,” Pip said.
“Thank you, Sargent Markase. I’ll be back for my physical qualifier,” Alice said. “Install a few surprises before then if you can.”
“Count on it.”