Do you know what I like about this prologue? The main character, the fact that it's unexpected, and that it happens in the middle of the war.
Spoiler alert for anyone who hasn't read up to Spinward Fringe Broadcast 9: Warpath!
It's that time again, when a few previews land on this page. This prologue takes place in a different part of the Iron Head Nebula as the Triton and Revenge are encountering Freeground Alpha.
The Nafalli are coming...
More previews are coming soon, so sit tight and enjoy!
Spoiler alert for anyone who hasn't read up to Spinward Fringe Broadcast 9: Warpath!
It's that time again, when a few previews land on this page. This prologue takes place in a different part of the Iron Head Nebula as the Triton and Revenge are encountering Freeground Alpha.
The Nafalli are coming...
More previews are coming soon, so sit tight and enjoy!
Prologue
The Rahgha
Order of Eden fighters swarmed between the ships of the
Iduoi Tribe convoy, hatefully blasting the most heavily armed ships before
Woone’s young eyes. An itch had been burning on the top of her dark furred snout,
but she was a nafalli warrior, and her hands were steady on the turret
controls.
“Shoot anything coming for your turret first, we need to
keep our gunners safe,” came the order over the comm stick she had pinned into
the fur next to her ear. The order came from her father, the Captain, and she
thought it was cowardly. Woone was sure she should fire at the enemy ships that
were causing the most damage to the least well defended, but she followed
orders regardless.
A trio of Order of Eden ships rose up from behind the Elloo,
one of their oldest ships. The round edged, long vessel was already losing
power to most of its critical systems, she feared for the thousands of nafalli
aboard. The enemy trio took a sweeping turn, and she opened fire with her quad
cannon, scoring hits by the time they were facing her.
The shields protecting her emplacement started taking
hits, flashing blinding light across the front of her turret. Gritting her
teeth, she concentrated on what her visor was showing, three dots with the
speed, distance, shield strengths, and operational status of each fighter in
simple codes. “These pilots are so stupid,” she grunted as she set her four
cannons to fire at maximum power.
Her fingers were going numb from holding the triggers
down for so long. These would be the fifteenth, sixteenth, and seventeenth
kills she made in less than fifteen minutes. The energy shield protecting her
turret was slowly depleting, the trio were trying to take her out, and she
hoped that the bolts of contained super-hot plasma her quad cannons were
spewing would take them out first. Their assault was so brazen, Woone was positive
they would be slag before she was.
The middle fighter’s shields dropped suddenly, and Woone
aimed for the sweet spot, right above and behind the narrow fighter’s canopy
there was a thin armour panel, and behind that was some kind of fuel cell. The
middle fighter exploded violently, sending the one to its port side spinning
sideways.
Small shards and chunks of the exploding fighter collided
with her shield like droplets of red hot metal rain as she aimed for the other
fighter, tearing into it at such a high, intense rate that the barrels of her
turrets were turning red. Woone activated the coolant gas to slow the heating
down, making sure she didn’t release so much that it would damage her turret.
The white plume of the coolant entering the heated space around the barrels
filled her view, so she completely relied on her tactical visor, ignoring the obstructed
view outside.
The second fighter was about to break off when its
shields failed, and she ripped into the side of the ship with cannon fire. The
third was regaining control, turning and flying away, and she blasted the ship
from behind. “Your shields were set to cover your nose, weren’t they?” she
growled to her enemy, even though they couldn’t hear her. “No running, you
little bug.”
The shields covering the aft side of the enemy fighter
winked out, and the pilot didn’t get a chance to spin their ship before several
high speed plasma bolts tore through the thin armour. “Burn!” she shouted as
the ship’s interior let a jet of atmosphere out then exploded as one of her
shots struck a fuel capsule.
That explosion was followed by a much larger blast that
lit up the dark corner of the nebula they tried to hide in for several seconds.
Large chunks of hardened hull plating drifted across her view, some of what
remained of the Order Carrier that attacked their peaceful convoy. She wished
she could spit on the massive shreds of hull plating, or make trophies of a few
of the crewmembers who still clung to hope inside sealed compartments, like her
ancestors did. They knew how to make examples of their enemies.
There were a few fighters in range, all flying away.
Woone squeezed a few rounds off at the closest ones for good measure, striking sporadically
and fairly ineffectively. “Better run,” she muttered as the last of them made
it out of her range. “Prepare for an emergency short distance jump,” came the
announcement through her communicator. It wasn’t her father, but her uncle
Rikin speaking.
The lights in the rear section of the Elloo lit back up,
and their main thrusters fired despite the terrible damage the large ship
sustained. To her relief, a wormhole split the space in front of it and the
ship slid inside, accelerating out of sight within seconds. Woone took a moment
to secure her post so the weapon couldn’t go off by mistake, and to scratch the
itch on top of her nose. The relief she felt at seeing the Elloo get away
safely was so intense she felt she could cry. While most of her immediate
family was on the Rahgha, one of their only fighting ships, she had over a
hundred cousins on the Elloo, and there were children aboard because it had a
heavily armoured core. Their entire tribe was set on breeding back to full
numbers, and she was left out because there were so few males left to couple
with, not that she liked her choices over the past year. That meant she could
concentrate on being a warrior, a passion of hers since she learned to track at
a very early age, and that she could visit the Elloo whenever she had time and
be surrounded by baby nafalli without having to take care of any of them after
leaving. Truly, the best of both worlds.
Their ship shuddered as it crossed into a wormhole,
something that had never happened before. The alarm went up and the flexible
panels of her containment suit closed. “Emergency, reactor three has failed,”
announced Rikin. “We are not going to be able to jump again. The convoy will be
going dark as soon as we arrive at our destination. If there is anyone near
Primary Junction Twenty-Eight, please deactivate the power flow to the rest of
the ship.”
That wasn’t good. It meant that enough of their convoy
was so damaged that they had to go dark in order to hide from sensors. Dead
dark, no systems running, scary dark. All so they could hide and make essential
repairs. With a start, Woone realized that she was close to Junction Twenty-Eight,
it was only a few strides behind her turret door.
With care, she turned her chair around and opened the
hatch. With a whoosh the atmosphere in her pod escaped into the vacuum in the
hallway. “Command Centre, I’m responding to your request,” she said. “The hall
behind my turret is depressurized.”
“Woone? Thank goodness you’re still alive. That section
was heavily damaged,” her aunt said. She was the Tribe matron, and the woman
Woone admired more than any fictional or real person in the universe. “Is there
anyone else nearby? Any sign of other survivors?”
Woone looked down the hallway in both directions. The
strange shifting white and blue light of starlight reflecting off of particles
in the nebula, amplified by the wall of their wormhole was the only
illumination in the broad hallway. The light was coming in through a broad rip
in the hull that ended three paces away from her turret pod. It was so still
and quiet, it made Woone wish she’d never opened her pod. People were lost
somewhere behind. People had died. It was the reality of war, but she couldn’t
help but wonder who she’d never see again.
Woone shook her head solemnly as she concluded that there
was only torn deck plating and the remains of a half-slagged reactor to her
right, and an empty hallway to her left. “I don’t see anyone, there aren’t even
any remains.”
“We can confirm that a few got into a secure room before
that area was damaged, but if what you’re seeing is right, most of them were
pulled out into space,” Loashi said. “Can you see the Junction Panel? Is it
still intact?”
Woone saw it right away. Several paces down the undamaged
end of the hallway there was a black panel with red stripes across it. “I can
get to it.” The ship emerged from the wormhole, and she pushed off from the
hatch of her turret pod.
“We have to shut down now,” Loashi said. “It’s going to
get very quiet and dark down there, Woone, so stay calm until we can get to
you. In the meantime, you can use your personal scanner to see if there are any
other crewmembers stuck back there. Do you think you could do that?”
“Pfft! Don’t worry about me, my suit didn’t take any
damage, so I can look for crewmates for days.”
“Okay, be careful,” Rikin said.
“Is my father all right?” Woone asked, dreading the
answer.
“We’ll discuss that when you’re safe,” Loashi said.
“No, is he safe?” Woone asked, making contact with the
Junction Panel and opening it.
“Woone-“
“Tell me, I need to know.”
“He was killed when the port shields failed,” Loashi
said. “I’m sorry.”
Woone found the control that would cut off most of the
ship’s power. “Ready to go dark?”
“He didn’t suffer,” Loashi said. The light flickering
around her dimmed. They were out of the wormhole.
“Are we ready?”
“Yes, Woone, go ahead.”
Woone pushed the mechanical button in and it sprung back
with a click. She knew the entire ship lost power then, they would be difficult
to detect using long range scanners. She turned back towards the rip in the
hull, it was broad and long, and she hadn’t noticed it thanks to the position
of her turret. What did that damage was so close to killing her too, she found
herself wondering if her family had been cursed. First, she’d failed to find a
good mate, then the Order of Eden raided their world and killed most of the
humans there along with her mother, and now her father was gone.
Through the hull breach she watched three of their lesser
armed ships go dark, the lights in their portholes flickering then going out.
It suited her. Let everyone feel as alone and lost as she did. They would work
in the dark, repairing whatever it was that kept them from trying to escape the
Iron Head Nebula.
A small green light appeared on her visor, indicating
that there was someone alive down the corridor, just past the breach. Woone
took a deep breath. “Father and Mother are both watching now,” she said,
feeling a tear roll down her furred cheek. “I will show you how I can save
people.”
5 comments:
Very nice scenario can't wait for the rest.
Space Opera at its finest.
Awesome preview -looking forward to the book! I *just* finished Broadcast 9 and followed the link at the end to this. What a great surprise that that this was posted a couple of hours before I clicked on it :-)
Really glad that Broadcast 10 is right around the corner? I preordered it . Waiting for 9 to be released was maddening!
I really enjoy how you are able to exploit the scene to bring forth the emotions the characters are going thru at significant moments in the story. Courage, compassion among others. I have read many scfi books but I find myself always coming back to the spinward fringe series. You have set the standard for what I look in any book. Emotion and the ability to live it thru words.
Keep up the good work!
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