Friday, April 15, 2011

A Return to Freeground In The Expendable Few Novella

The story in Broadcast 7 outgrowing the confines of one book has become a calling to tell a story that was left out of the Spinward Fringe series. Normally, when I cut a story out of a book it's because the book is already dense enough, or that story wasn't good enough to run as a sub-plot.

When I cut this recent story out of Broadcast 7: Framework, I did so knowing that I would still have to tell it. I still had to develop that plot line. More importantly, I had to tell it before the current Spinward Fringe series came to an end.

That plot line has become the upcoming free novella called The Expendable Few. If there was to be a fourth book in the old First Light Chronicles Series, this would be it. For all the readers wondering whatever happened to Freeground, here are your answers. As a further nod to the three novellas that started it all, Freeground, Limbo and Starfree Port, the new novella - Expendable Few - will be free.

There is a testing group already mostly in place, the novella is half finished, and if I've done everything well enough, someone could read this book without reading the rest of the Spinward Fringe series. It's far more interesting if you read it as part of the series, particularly as Broadcast 6.5, however. I'm offering it for free, AND it will be included with Broadcast 7 when it is released.

Here's a brief synopsis for The Expendable Few:

Freeground has changed since the return of the First Light. Instead of re-integrating with the rest of humanity, the Freeground Nation has become more xenophobic and Isolated. The Puritan Party has assumed control. Censorship, social engineering, and xenophobia are even more common, and thousands of citizens who have the means and opportunity to leave are doing so. The dream of living in a secure and free culture hasn't died entirely, however.

A few Freeground Citizens opposed to the Puritan Party put plans into motion that will either bring liberty back to the Freeground Nation or send the entire culture into a downward spiral. This tale is told from the perspective of a politically contrary Fleet Commander, Clark Patterson, who is obsessed with the adventures, intrigues and antics of the First Light crew. He knows everything one can about their short service aboard, and has every piece of contraband footage of them after they departed. He's even investigated the terrorist, Jacob Valance, whose very name is a curse according to the Puritan Party. His life, his world and those he holds most dear are shaken when he has a direct run in with a West Keeper - a spy working for a galactic cult called the Order of Eden that is bent on controlling industry and the natural wonders with their reach and beyond.

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The real thrill for me in writing the first half of the novella was writing Freeground as it was originally conceived. I honestly didn't have the patience to demonstrate the xenophobia and censorship that surrounded the Freeground culture before. I was too excited about telling the Jonas story, and I don't regret it. I don't regret it because in The Expendable Few the problems of censorship, control and xenophobia drive the story in the first half of this novella. A return to first person perspective after a million words or more of writing is also very interesting to me.

How far away is the release of The Expendable Few? We're talking weeks if the test group enjoys it. Only two members of the test group have read the Spinward Fringe series, the rest are new to it, so it's getting a trail by fire.

Work on Broadcast 7 continues, and that book will only be delayed for a couple of weeks because of The Expendable Few. I believe this is a necessary book to developing the final act in Broadcast 7, however. I'd much rather write the Expendable Few in its entirety rather than write it up as twenty pages of developmental notes and shut them away after Broadcast 7 is finished.

I hope you agree.

RL

[If you have no idea what I'm talking about in this post, then you should go download a copy of Spinward Fringe Broadcast 0: Origins. It's free, and the download links are on the right hand side of this page.]

5 comments:

Allan B. said...

It sounds terrific so far. I can't wait to read it myself.
Patiently awaiting Broadcast 7, and 8 of course, but this Novella is a sweet little addition and of course you have my thanks for another awesome freebie in the Spinward Fringe series...

Mike Fisher said...

Very cool, RL. A living, breathing, GROWING universe is very welcome to a fan like me. There are darn few of them in this arena.

Keep up the great work - we'll be here for the entire ride.

MDF (@Comkey)

JamT said...

Awesome! I was wondering how life on freeground was going after finishing book 6.

Keep up the great work, i cant wait to read this novella aswell!


Ps. When i saw i had an email from your blog i got all excited thinking broadcast 7 was out! :D

Randolph Lalonde said...

I'm glad people are still excited about this novella, development is going well, and writing is finally going smoothly. In the last two weeks I've written the first 10,000 words once, scrapped them, then written the real 11,000 words. For me, that's really quick, especially while turning out another 10k words for Broadcast 7. It seems any project that matters involves a partially written book that gets scrapped, it's like a good omen at this point.

I'm also really happy to see that the feed is working, the only problem with it so far is that I can't pick and choose which blog post prompts an email. The solution? Better blog posts posted less frequently so I'm not spamming everyone who signed up.

Well, time for some dinner. I'm checking out a Star Wars Sith Zombie novel tonight, and I'll post a short review on Goodreads. My expectations are low.

Massive thanks!

RL

Unknown said...

If you need more test subjects a friend and I love the series and both teach or taught writing/English and would love to help proof.

Otherwise, keep the pen moving we are waiting with breathless anticipation!

Michael


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